The video is great as far as I'm concerned! The only suggestion I might add is that, at the 1:04 mark when Paul is being quoted, having a quick clip pertaining to Christ's Sonship preceding the clips of His suffering may be helpful. Hearing President Monson speak of Christ's eternal nature and Godhood while seeing Christ being scourged feels conflicting (even though the quote then speaks of His suffering). It would be less jarring if a clip were added before showing the more heart-wrenching parts of the Atonement. Other than that it's a great video!