I liked the video until 1:16. We have Elder Bednar relating this wonderful story of faith and then there is this voice over that sounds mechanical teaching about faith leading to action. It would have been better if Elder Bednar stated that last part. The statement is great, but seemed out of place with how it was presented. Particularly the voice.
The last quote is great but would be better with a better background. Use the same background used when starting the video and title.