You asked for feedback and I wanted to provide it.
There are very few films produced by the Church - almost none - that don't work for me, but this video is one of them. For me, there is some kind of disconnect with the little kids talking about grown up things using grown up words, instead of talking in terms of kid things using kids' words.
I believe that - again, for me - having a screen-friendly adult actor and actress playing a married couple, discussing those same principles, would work very well.
I also want to say thank you for all the effort this team puts in to these. You need to know they make a huge difference in people's lives, including mine.
Stone Creek Ward, Layton, Utah South Stake
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